Winning WOL for Sun Nivea Comp |
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posted 20-3-2009 @ 12:03 PM
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Winning WOL for Sun Nivea Comp
As promised on the other thread, here it is:
Out watching cricket in the sun
Use Nivea Sun to watch them run
See the wickets fall one by one
Without your skin getting overdone
Is anyone else willing to share their winning entry? |
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posted 20-3-2009 @ 12:15 PM
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That's really good  I can never remember mine and i always forget to store.. |
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posted 20-3-2009 @ 12:43 PM
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I like yours LittleMo. I actually kept mine this time. It was written from oh's point of view cos he needs sunscreen more than I do. 
It protects my aging, balding head
from melanomas
and instead
helps keep my midlife dream alive….
man and mal’, just hanging 5! |
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posted 20-3-2009 @ 01:14 PM
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Both very good entries. |
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posted 20-3-2009 @ 01:36 PM
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Thank you - I was lucky this time. it just came together. Usually I struggle. |
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posted 21-3-2009 @ 10:33 AM
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I love both entries, congratulations on your win and thanks so much for sharing |
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posted 21-3-2009 @ 01:54 PM
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My winning entry which I knocked up in a couple of minutes while viewing the trusty rhymezone website........fun, run, sun, overdone and one rhyme don't they? LOL (just noticed LittleMo had most of the same ones).
Knowing I’m well protected from the sun,
How could I not have fun?
No worries about being cooked and overdone,
Nivea Sun, it’s the one! |
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posted 22-3-2009 @ 07:30 PM
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Too funny pineapples - so close........ |
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posted 22-3-2009 @ 08:49 PM
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Heres mine and yes, I have fun and overdone too.......
Personally, I thought mine was pretty lame but hey, $100 here it comes.
"..nothing healthy about tans” the ads say
With Nivea Sun you can still play
Sunburn protection; continuous fun
No chance looking like bacon overdone
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posted 25-9-2009 @ 01:12 PM
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very good!!! well done... everyone |
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posted 25-9-2009 @ 02:36 PM
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congrats everyone, lots of rhyming winners
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posted 25-9-2009 @ 03:07 PM
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Thanks for sharing, so much literary talent in LOTTOs.!!!
Hope to improve my WOL entries. |
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