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posted 6-5-2007 @ 05:54 PM
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What do you think of these?
Hey all,
I'm starting to try and make rhyming 25 wol. Just wanted some opinions on these.
Good vibes -
Music sets me on fire,
and sends me up higher,
This is what gives me good vibes
Mum deserves a break -
My mum is the best
She needs a well deserved rest
She cooks she cleans and she irons
That's why shes the best
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posted 6-5-2007 @ 05:57 PM
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They sound great to me but I am no good at WOL so I am not the best to ask on here. I am sure you will get some great tips & feedback from some of
the lotto legends around here! Best of Luck!
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posted 6-5-2007 @ 05:59 PM
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good vibes.....little bit of the Doors eh?... |
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posted 6-5-2007 @ 07:06 PM
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I think this one was pretty good
Q: Why do I need a blackberry phone?
A: Best of the best, can't have any of the rest,
Wireless internet, music and more, This is what I need for sure!
Q: What special moment would I want to record on HD DVD?
A: We bought a new cat, it's a bit like a rat,
Its antics deserve only the best,
and Sony outdoes all the rest
Sony was the one that had the HD DVD Q so felt it was great to mention them
What do you guys think? Getting better? |
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posted 7-5-2007 @ 12:53 AM
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All winners.Good luck,hope you get lots of nice surprises in the mail. |
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